(#) lycus 2008-02-12
Well that was an intresting chapter, but harrys' change in attitude was too sudden. maybe have him realise that stunningg an enemy doesn't work or have it that harrys new queen had forced her will on harry, and after the fact he went into shock so the reality won't hit him until later. and as far as hedwig I didn't see it so it didn't happen, plus tat would have been cruel to have harrys' relationship with hedwig improve just so that she would die is just wrong. and harry/hermione and luna I love it and I really hope that you have that as the relationship, you even gave a clue about how harry has some one who can calm him down even when he is in a rage that would be hermione, and the firts person to contact was hermione. anyway i'm enjoying your story and i'm waiting for the update.