Okay, first off, propositioning a lady usually means a man is trying to convince her to have a lewd encounter with him of a sexual nature. Proposing to a lady is what one does when one is asking for her hand in marriage. I'd gotten to the chapter this story is based on in Experience, and I was given the distinct impression that Tarkin got belted for attempting to get into his fellow Moffs pants, not for proposing marriage. That being said, this is still a very amusing story, and a wonderfull effort, thank you. I'll review Vengance when I've finished Experience.