Sad this can't be rated anymore, I think it very good.
That said, I have to agree with the other reviewers comments.
Harry needs Hermione for her intelligence and curiosity and common sense.
It was pointed out the Luna's eye were now white. That usually means that someone is a full blown seer able to see the lines of possibility. I think Luna could play a major part in guiding Harry.
(Grin) I think the threesome H/HR/L (possibly more)would be great. But that me, I like harems.
I also agree that killing Hedwig so soon after they have learned to talk to each other seems to be terrible timing. Course, I HAVE enjoy the stories when she comes back as a Phoenix. Either way, I think her opinions should be heard.
OK, Harry's attitude. I have all seven cannon books, and still thinks Harry was something of a wimp. But I agree that the quick change to "slaughter them" is a little fast. Course, the reactions of all the different ladies and teachers when he realizes what he had done should be interesting considering all their origins.
As indicated above, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
May the MUSE be with you!!!