Review for Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

Harry Potter and the Order of the Templar

(#) jacoc9453 2008-02-16

ok heres my idea, awsom story, please stop neglecting rachel have harry adopt here or something, as harry though not jerico, im but a humble reader that likes this story but hate the pain you put rachel through.
please do this humble reader a favoure and make harry more contious.