Review for Surprise!

Surprise!

(#) Pheonee 2006-07-28

Thank you for updating and I just LOOOVE this chapter! Exept you seem to have forgotten Jay's injuries? Maybe you could have Theresa wondering mildly why the hug was so wet and bloody but not caring a jot because it was nice anyway. Have her finally getting a good look at Jay and screaming and fretting her head off. Have the rest of the team freaking out or something...

All the same, it was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO madly brilliant. You get better with each word I read. Please update soon, love ya, bye!