I like how Harry befriended the young ones outside the platform. That is something that is pure Harry but I haven't read it just that way before.
You've said Hermione's not under a love potion so please leave her with Ron. It would be interesting if Ron tired of her for a change leaving her alone. But then Harry would be the gallant hero and come to her aid unless there was already a future Mrs. Potter to keep him away.
Your depiction of Luna was one of the closest to my opinion of the young lady that I've ever read.
If you couldn't guess... I LIKE THIS STORY.
Author's response
- Yeah I thought so. It seemed to me that someone like Harry would make sure that others never had the problem with the platform that he had.
- Any woman in Harry's life had best be ready for him to go to Hermione is she needs him. If not, she's in the wrong relationship.
- Luna's fun.