I like this story, very much. Jack is in character, and even the OC is witty and not "OOOHHHHH saaaave me, ect." I am hoping that you update this story soon! (:
Author's response
Thank you very much, I'm always afraid I don't have sufficient enough vocabulary to truly excercise Jack's character. It's something I'm working on. Also, I'm glad you like the OC. I've added another chapter, which I hope you enjoy, and will be contuining to contribute to this story each week. For sneak peeks into the next chapter of this story and others, feel free to check out my fanfiction.net profile. The link is on my FicWad profile, enjoy and I hope to hear more from you! Thank you again!