Review for Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

(#) lycus 2008-02-20

Damn I had to read your story again and really pay attention to what I read this time, as for what happened between harry and everyone else I can only guess, but later on how harry was interacting with neville I would have to say that whatever happened had to be big in that harry called neville his best friend. so it would be something that harry could never completely forgive or forget. and harry could have a relationship with tonks since harry has never been a child, and now that he doesn't have the weight of the world on his shoulders he could at least have some fun with tonks even if it's a friends with benefits sort of thing and she could help him become more expierenced with women, so that he knows what he is doing later on. and as for hermione it seems that i've put her above the normal teenager in regards to hormones, but you did give us some hope when she was questioning herself about why she was with ron, when she thought that ron wasn't harry and that something is missing in that relationship. and maybe it will have to be hermione seeing that she might lose harry to one of the witches of the contracts to make her come to her senses.