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The Pros and Cons of Breathing
The Pros and Cons of Breathing
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mooniexmisfit
2008-02-22
I reallllly reallly like this, very new concept. Good Job!
The only sort of constructive critisism I can come up with is when they hit her, they were just sort of, "oh well, no gas and a dead friend. Let's go back to the cabin."
But still, good job!