(#) Cara 2008-02-23
i think u shouldnt make a sequel i mean its just cause ive read a few stories similar to this one on ficwad and other places and if/when the girl runs away the writer always skips ahead a few years and makes them like all poor or something so i dunno its just my opinion but i think u should continue it and not really in as much detail but like show stuff breifly and maybe she can become a famous model but her face isnt really everywhere until shes older so wen mcr is famous they dont really reconise her or something. its just an idea i thought id throw out into the open:) (lol i didnt relize how long this was until i finsished :P)
Author's response
lol
interesting
i might use some of ur ideas
well
i kinda am in like ur track atm
might change it on the way lol
hahaha
nah long reviews are liek totallly COOL!
thanks
:D
xx