You know, you should probably change "Herminoe Granger" in your disclaimer to "Emma Watson". I mean really...
Otherwise, nice take on the idea. Pity Daphne was the first to be asked out, that almost certainly means that Harry won't end up with her. Not enough stories, good or otherwise, with those two together.
Author's response
- No, Emma doesn't do much for me, her Hermione is just... not right to me. The Hermione in my mind doesn't look a think like Ms. Watson.
- Just because Daphne is the first he asked doesn't mean that their relationship will end. They're young.