This Fic looks to be very good.
I think that the Patils whould be a good addition to Harry's slaves because no offence to anyone but with there culture and the way the wizarding world is i whouldnt be suprised if they were subs.
For Gabrielle you whold have to get around the fact that Vella are probably doms seeing as they are sexual creatures to begin with.
And of course alwasy a fan of Greengrass and Davis beeing with Harry.
Keep up the good work, cant wait for a new chapter.