Nice chapter.
Like that you decided to hold off on introducing Ginny and instead consolidate his relationship with Tonks.
The confrontation with Dumbles was interesting and shows that Dumbles lost a lot of influence after the war.
Thought the Tonks' were deceased so it was a suprise for them to show up at Gringotts.
Think it would be interesting for them to come to dinner once a week. To visit Nymphadora and also start to give Harry the extended family he has always wanted.
Loved the crown, very artistic.
The signing papers to make Tonks his porperty officially, what does that entail exactly. From the first chapter I can guess that her vaults were transferred to Harry's name and are sub branches of the Potter vaults now if she still has any access without Harry's permission.
While I like the idea of dressing his girls up with style I don't know if dresses would be functional for Tonks given how much time she spends on her knees beside Harry.
Missed a nice opportunity with the dress shop for Harry to recieve a fashion show.
While on the matter of appearance I noticed a common mistake of writing Tonks. That is when authors say Harry prefers her in real form and then they go out into public did she change her appearance to something else in public or did she still have her white hair and pink eyes.
Can't wait to see what kind of sub Ginny is and also how Hermione reacts.
More soon please.
Author's response
The tonks thing I messed up with: Forgot that her parents were dead, ignore that in the first chapter.
The signing of the papers makes it official in the eyes of the ministry, just to prevent future problems
And Harry said that Tonks should be whatever she is comfortable in: not that he particularly enjoys one form. He just said pink is sexy because she was insecure about her eyes.