You said that there were levels of dominants. Dominents have to have some kind of competition. Wonder if they might co-tow to higher dominant like your higher/lower sub's?.
Hermione in the canon was introduced as a intelligent bookworm who retreated into herself because of criticism. Even you have shown her having a fantasy of being taken in a library, so you must see her a some kind of sub, possibly a higher one, kind of like a head maid. The head maid controls the running of the females of the house under the master or the master's wife.
Most of your school female's are the same school year level as Harry, cepting Ginny and Tonks. What of the upper and lower levels? There is mention of many girls in Hogworts are thinking, considering (crushing) about Harry. How many others has Harry bound without knowing about it. Uh .... out of school and/or in the war, TOO?
It might be interesting to see the female teachers (ie. McGonigal) reacting later in age because on suppressed natures, nother way to take some of the control from Dumblydore.
(Snicker) Don't forget Reta, the reporter bug. Reporters are full of issues and it might be a good way to have "some" control of the press.
Wonder how magical creature (besides Vela) will react to Harry. (grin)
That gives me an opening to bring up Molly's reaction. Oh, boy the ministries and the wizingamont also. Eeeeek!, THE QUEEN, and mundane ministry etc. too!
Is this a enough ideas for now?
Anyway, thanks for a good and fun read. Most definitely want to see where you go with this.
May the MUSE be with you!!!
Author's response
I wanted to make a point of limiting the girls to around Harry's age. So no McGonagall, no Rita, no Molly.
Girls like Katie Bell are fun, Angelina and Alicia too. Theres a reason I either killed off or sent away the majority of the main male character :-)