I was so sick my head was literally exploding and reading this chapter is the first thing I've done since I could look at the computer screen without my eyes burning and watering. And I've gotta say woow, amazing chapter!
And aaahhhhh, Frankie should have just kept his mouth shut!!! Gee must have felt rejected... I feel so sorry for Gerard, really. But still, I think Mikey wouldn't have let Alyssa die for nothing. Maybe, he thought something worse would happen if they rescued her? Like his own brother dying trying to rescue the woman she loves, maybe?
Wow! You actually gave us so many answers in this chapter but it's like those answers give birth to new questions. Has anyone told you you're such an evil genius, huh?
For some weird reason, the parts I always love reading about (especially in Frerards) are the beginnings of a relationship. The uncertain touches, coy smiles and things like that. The two characters denying what they feel and all. And now, Gee and Frankie are in that phase and I love it!!!
I talk too much, right?
Whatever... I'll be waiting for the next update!
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Author's response
Thanks for putting a huge grin on my face like you always do ;) Sorry to hear you were sick, but at least you are better now!
I like that part of the relationship too, thats why most of my stories have that phase in them.
You don't talk too much, you know i love your reviews ;)
Relax and take care of yourself so you don't get sick again. I'm going to work on the next chapter right now.
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