(#) Vanir 2008-03-01
You know, this is one excellent way to spend some quality time with my comp.
Daphne is intriguing, and the thing where she asked Neville for the pictures were brilliant, and it reveals that she's not quite so unwilling to explore as she sort of appears. I can just see her and Harry plot revenge against her parents for forcing her to take those pictures, perhaps with Neville's assistance.
Hey, I have a dirty mind. I get readers that way!
That kind of revenge sounds just like the thing this kind of Harry would go for.
We also need to know more about the betrayals. Ginny and Molly as deceiving bitches has been done, but you're a creative one.
For once a Vanir and an OdinMage agrees: Don't forget the others.
Vanir
Author's response
- They aren't going to be all that serious for the foreseeable future. Harry's just discovering what it means to be alive.
- Who did what to whom (and with what) will be revealed in a chapter or two...