that was really upsetting. well written but yea. i really didnt like that mikey and the rest of the band didnt like gee and frankies relationship. i think in real life they'd be cool with it. i cant see them using the word "unnatural".
so...even though that kinda sounded like i was saying i didnt like the story, its not true. i actually really liked the story; you write really well and it was interesting to read a different view point for a frerard. good job! :)
cheers
kat