Review for Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

(#) lycus 2008-03-01

Another great chapter, thanks for the non-sexual scene with hermione. as for the falling out between harry and his friends you've given enough information on why the split happened. But I also realized that the turning point in your story is when hermione and ron break up. hermione will turn to harry for comfort and ron will be by himself unless he gets another girlfriend since he can't be around harry now. but also ginny may have cost harry his friends but I would really like to see her reaction to harry having new friends and also dating, I mean it sounds like she woul pitch a fit when she found out that harry was dating someone and not miserable.

Author's response

- Everyone wants to begrudge Hermione her nookie...

- Ron and Hermione will have a parting of the ways in a chapter or two, and no Ginny isn't going to be thrilled about Harry's relationship with Daphne.