I really liked this, screw if it isn't how they would react in real life. In real life Gerard's married and Frank is soon to be married. This isn't real, it's fan fiction, and I absolutely love it Charli =)
I really like that it was short and blunt and to the point and that last line just knocked the breath right out of me.
It's made me go all thoughtful... instead of bouncing off the walls because of a certain text I recieved last night XD
anyway... essay over. That was amazing. I can't wait to see how the other 99 turn out! You're really progressing as a writer and it's good to see you try different styles. I like it =D