Review for Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

(#) alec_potter 2008-03-03

Nice chapter.
1> Dont do the back ground, it's more intriguing that way. And we have read loads of stories with back grounds, even betrayal once so not that interested in knowing it.
2> Nevilli has a good character, good to see him getting his space.
3>Is Harry going to keep seeing different girls or going to settle in on one girlfriend. I know you or someone said that they don't have to choose life parters now, but you can atleast settle on girlfriend.
4>Interesting to see the Hermione situation. I always like H/Hr but this looks promising.
Kudos, update your stories soon.

Author's response

Thank you.