Review for Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

(#) SaraWinters 2008-03-03

See? This is the potential I always knew Neville had. To show a little backbone. I love the way you've written him.

Hermione has always been smart, but never all that tactful when it comes to other people's feelings. I still wonder if the whole thing with Ginny is going on because Hermione and Ron are simply too chicken to stand up to his mother. They're adults and can't be friends because of what? It's silly.

And Daphne...well, I might have acted rashly if I'd had her date. LOL Will the time she's spent with Harry make her fall hard or will Tracey snap her out of it like a daydream?

Author's response

- I always try to write a strong Neville... Usually after tying him to a Hufflepuff...

- Pretty much. As I see it, they're adults, but don't believe it yet.

- Now that would be telling...