(#) Felur 2008-03-04
Your story is very enjoyable as always. However I have one problem with it. For me Harry and Slytherin Ice Queen (usually Daphne or Blaise)ship is an overused cliche, almost all Slytherin girl (except Pansy) with relationship with our hero shows this feature. Fortunately, you only partially build on this character, but I advise, try to make more unique your Daphne
Finally I would not mind if Harry later date with an other girl (e.g. with an intelligent Rawenclaw, this is very rare in the fanfics).