It's good so far, but you need to be careful. Even though this story is completely fictional, abuse, no matter what form, is a touchy subject for many people. It's a good story line, just trying to be helpful.
Author's response
yeah, I know
I don't usually write things like this, but I did for this one
I'm really sorry if you're offended or hurt by it, but it is purely fictional
now I feel bad about it...
I'm sorry...