Very, very nice!
You write Harry and Daphne really well, and the pace of their date is lovely and natural.
I do hope, as this fine story progresses, that you will reveal what happened with Remus and Ginny, as well as what will happen.
The joke on Fred and George was perfect, and if the Murtlap doesn't work, there's always Skelegrow!
Author's response
- Thanks
- I'm amazed at how well they are meshing. It wasn't intentional, but there you go.