(#) BenRG 2008-03-09
A nice little parody on the Harem concept (and I speak here as a fan of those stories). I was so glad that it wasn't intended to be serious. Some Harem-makers go too far (and some of them post here). Your work exposes the silliness by going to the absolute limit of absurdity.
I liked your portrayal of Petunia too. It was inevitable that she would have the kind of faux religion that so many people have: Sure that they are righteous without actually doing anything.
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Thank you!
Sorry I'm so late replying.
Your work exposes the silliness by going to the absolute limit of absurdity.
Ayup, that was exactly what I was aiming for.