AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW u gotta not stop there!!!!! ur a rlly gud writer!! enjoyed readin the WHOLE thing!! i was wonderin if u were gonna continue the story.. and right when i saw u did i had 2 read it from the 1st chatpter 2 the last :P 5 STARS OUR OF 5!!!!! :D