Your command of the language is excellent! Yes, there are a few subtle errors, but in general you write much better than many native speakers I know.
An interesting pairing! I usually lean toward Sano/Megumi myself, but you do an excellent job of making this development believable. I particularly like the insight into Megumi's personality, based on her past with Kanryuu.
Author\'s Response: Thank you very much for your comments. I try to be as proficient as possible with my English, though I know I can't be totally 'perfect'. He he, interesting indeed. I didn't think it possible until my friend wrote the first E/Meg fic I ever seen (Children of the Revolution, you can find it in FF net), and then, I learned 'the error of my ways'. Megumi is a wonderful character. Few people understand her, reducing her to the 'b*' or 'home wrecker' she is not, but fan girls believe she is. Though I don't linger much about her POV about Sano, in chapter 2, you'll find a reference to him. And as I despise bashing characters, you won't find me writing Megumi as having a low opinion of him, rather the contrary. I just play in other things to build the E/Meg pairing. IMO, Sano/Meg at the stage they leave in the manga is not possible, but maybe in a few years, when both of them puts their feelings and things in order, and Sano matures a bit more, well, it might be.Anyway, thanks a lot for your insight, and I hope you stay tuned for the rest. ;) :)