Review for Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

(#) rijlkent 2008-03-11

Heya, Clell,

Fun chappie. I'm of course honored you made use of my offering... I think there might be more reviews mentioning it than I've gotten total for my fic started over on FF.net. Makes me want to think of another.... meh. Blank now.

Anyhow, I like the way things are moving... Harry and Daphne seem perfect (which is nice for Harry and for readers who like Harry, but maybe it's too perfect).

I could see them taking the next and then Daphne gets doubts or Tracey's paranoia gets out of hand. (Harry: You had me followed, Daph? "No, that was all Tracey's idea" "Did you know?" "Umm...." well, it's a rough idea. They could also decide that they can't deal with the baggage they bring right now...

Your Ginny sounds seriously deluded/conflicted if she thinks Harry's hers after the way she tried to force his friends away. I agree with the reviewers suspicious of Ron, and I'm also glad to see Hermione seeing Harry happy without her. I'm not too chuffed with her (+Ron) taking the path of least resistance away from Harry. (Even if Harry doesn't mind that they did.)

Anyhow. Fun stuff. Thanks
-Rijl