Review for Blood

Blood

(#) broken_wings 2008-03-12

I loved it. It definately deserves to win, although I would've liked to hear a little more when Jamia (Im assuming) broke up with Frank. Other than that, its perfect, and heartbreaking.

Author's response

thank you
I know it won't win, as there are much better entries
but I thought it was worth a shot

actually that's a good point
I had the story in my head, but I never really wrote about it
I'll try to change it!