Harry and Harri disappearing into the RoR for hours at a time? Sounds dirty to me =P.
I would say that the duel with the auror was far to easy for Harry as stories are more interesting if the characters don't easily overcome all obstacles. Apart from that it was quite enjoyable and I'll really loving this new universe.
Author's response
- As long as they're not sitting in a tree...
- Would the duel had been too easy if Riddle was in Harry's place? Of course not, if anything Riddle would have crushed her far more easily. Harry is supposed to be Riddle's equal, and is being trained by a magical clone of Riddle to be just that.