Review for Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

(#) Elfwyn 2008-03-14

Another lovely chapter. Loved the interactions of the characters and Nev's story to Dumble's; can't wait for more of those to show up. Will you ever tell how it really happened?

I too have wondered about the adult student status at Hogwarts. It would be or should be more like college for seventh years. Glad to see someone else using there head.

Kudos for the wonderful flushing out of both Daphne and Hannah. I like how Daphne has her own overly controlling/bossy friend just like Harry. Some stories are written in such a way it makes you want to have Harry tell his friend to shove it and walk away.

Cyber chocolate to you in the hopes for a quick update of this little gem.

Author's response

- No, not planning on it... In the last chapter I might have Harry tell dumbles that the real story was one of those he was told, but refuse to specify which...

- I'm glad someone saw what I was doing, giving Daphne her own Hermione...

- I'm always open to bribes...