(#) Vanir 2008-03-15
Lovely, this way to make the top dog an underdog. Luna is a great character, especially her "male" patterns. You are very thorough in the swapping, but i actually do believe you're exaggerating the inequality a bit. Just a little, though. Harri/y's training session is something to look forward to.
Vanir
Author's response
- I see it as more 'dominate' than 'male' but, yeah.
- Maybe a bit, but it advances the story...
- I fully expect Orestes to be completely freaked out.