While I'm well and truly used to how you write Harry in your stories, this time, you failed to make it even remotely believable at all. Summarizing Harry and Hermionie's changes, alongside a great deal of summarized implied political maneuvering as well as having all of three actual scenes in the whole chapter... it feels like you were bored with this part, and just wanted to get it over with.
It just feels like a throwaway rather than a chapter to me.
Author's response
Don't worry, you don't have to read it. I'll likely stop writing after this story is finished in any event; at least long stories. I've probably written too many long stories as it is.