Wow, I was not expecting the attack on Lupin (or the grenade - excellent twist).
I did not get the impression that the summary part was boredom, more like the details weren't important. How many dates between Harry and Hermione did we need to see?
The Ravenclaw sisterhood is an interesting idea. Like a previous reviewer, it seems strange that they would put in with Voldie, but I can understand (to some extent, having a politically aware 13 year old :-) how children will parrot their parents' political views.
Thanks for writing! I can understand the need to get away from fanfic writing. But don't let bad reiviews make you feel like you should leave. Leave when the ideas stop coming or when it's no longer fun.
Tom A.