Review for Summer of Contracts

Summer of Contracts

(#) Wonderbee31 2008-03-17

Most excellent! Got to say, it sure looks like with all that's happened, with what looks to be an unwelcome suitor on the way, as well as how Harry acted with her, that Susan might be re-evaluatiung Harry and her prospects with him(I hope so, as she, and a few of the other girls are great secondary characters that can be brought to life in fanfics, while given very short shrift in canon). I do hope to maybe see her make a small move on Harry soon, as well as Luna deciding enough's enough, and it's time to get Harry over his fears, one way or another, LOL. Also in this chapter, you hit on one of the bigger problems I have with Molly and Ginny, sho always looked to be a mini-Molly in canon at times. Molly tells you what to do, she has a big mouth, and so does Ginny, and with all the people that tried to control Harry, I just see him having difficulties with putting up with that, if know what I mean. Harry gets home, and she immediately starts to order him around, so I could see Harry feeling resentful. That, along with Dumbledore and his seeming to gear up to Harry becoming dark, no matter what the facts might be, well, here's looking forward to what will come from that next time.