(#) Vanir 2008-03-21
No, you shouldn't. As it is , it's such a brilliant hopeless feeling, settling for what one has rather than what one wants. To decide that one's life has no more to give, and it's time to tend the pieces, and piece together an existence, as life has passed one by.
Thanks. For the first time, though, i feel a vague need for a backstory.
Vanir
Author's response
Ha. I clarified the end by adding the bolded promise in parentheses as soon as I read her review. Since I'm surmising that you only just read this, I can assume that my adjustments blended well. ^-^
And I do suppose that you're right about the backstory...perhaps I'll do a prequel, hmm? I don't think I can fix that just by editing a little. Thanks for the lovely review, Vanir.