Review for Disenchanted

Disenchanted

(#) linerlover 2008-03-26

haha i love the over-protective bob-ness. so cute! awwwwww's
im taking it from your reply that you found those stories okay... which chapters are you on?
ummm yeah, anyway. yet another great one. and i think just for extra added effect you should have some sort of gerard-frank showdown, or one of them beating up an annoying member of the paparazzi. that would be fun sigh
another thing: “He’s still sleeping…he slept late, drawing again…”Mikey answered. i love that bit, and i thought you could try getting alix to 'discover' his drawing pad and hes been drawing her or the such like.
anyway, great chapter loves and please update soon! :D