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Why Can't Life Be Simple?
Why Can't Life Be Simple?
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CuteWriter
2008-03-26
The characters could be expanded further and why certain things are happening. Amelias emotions about the baby could be brought into it more to emphasis this.
Loving the story so far, can't wait to see what happens between Frank and Amelia :).