Review for Harry's Second Chance

Harry's Second Chance

(#) saugart 2006-07-31

You write: "a pair of wild dementors which where still sticking with him." You mean "...which were still...."

Also, I think the nasty werewolf is called "Greyback" in the American editions, not "Grayback".

Congratulations on your new job, wherever it is. At least, I hope that the move is because you have found some nice position in a History department where you'll have a bit of time to work on your research. (The fact that you're moving in August is evidence supporting this hypothesis.)