I read through it, and though The story itself, that chapter part, feels done. I feel like it's a little... ~pauses~ undone. Like it needs something else to make it truly finished. perhaps a second part, or a alternate view... right now, I'm considering adding the point of view of the second person to The Oracle All Flowers Need Sunshine but I don't know. I like it now... if I go adding things i'll probably hate it. ~sighs~ I'm trying to figure out whether I really want to continue with the story too. It's not like I don't have the time for it, but it's just really uninspiring to write here. There is like, no feedback, no criticism, nobody is saying anything about what is wrong... I'm kinda drowning myself, here.
But then again, I'm the kind who thrives on criticism, because I want to make things better.