Nice one...but your chapters are a bit short...so if can plz either increase the length or the frequency.
Liked the networking analogy... can't we simply infect one of the nodes with some virus to clean it all. After all i haven't understood the real need for these things...they are definitely creepy.
Is the effect gonna be like an Imperious curse, as in you have a voice which nudges you in a direction or is it going to be like a total take over of mind. Caz if it's an imperious there is a chance to fight it, and only the weak minded will fall for it.
Update soon.
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Would you believe a little bit of both?
GG