When I grow up I want to be an awesome writter just like you! I really like this story. I'm always down for some drama and breaking perfect couples up because, well, that's what happens in life. There is no perfect in the real world.
These kids share such a bond that it hurts me that they hurt.
Great writing.
And I loved the spiderman reference. I thought I was the only one who noticed Toby all of a sudden had bangs and reminded me of Pete Wentz.
I can't wait for another chapter.
KayRod