Um...wow, just wow. Uh-may-zing chapter.
I'm extremely confused now, though.
I mean, I thought her story was believable, for the most part. And the way you write her makes her seem trustworthy, but I guess that could be a technique. Anyway, shape shifting to me, has always sounded like a suspicious power. I don't know why, but maybe it's because you never really know who you're talking to... But her story was good. It's just the "it's like my legs knew the way." that kind of bugs me.
And in any case, I just...feel like Frank's right about The Flaw. Or maybe it's because it's Frank and I feel sorta obliged to agree with him.
Well, I hope things clear up a bit more soon. Can't wait 'til you update again, but no pressure if you're busy. Take your time.
Oh and by the way, I heard God Or Julie. They're pretty damn good!
Author's response
Thank you!^^
Lol "Or maybe it's because it's Frank and I feel sorta obliged to agree with him" Everyone feels that way, it's cute xD
I agree with you about her power though, but maybe thats because of X-Men?
Glad you like them, they really need more fans.
Thanks so much for reviewing
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