(#) Vanir 2008-03-28
Yeah, what Cat said, but with the additional question, Is there any one he knew left alive?
Highly enjoyable, and with my annoying metaphors, i do enjoy this charcoal sketced storytelling. You tell us everything we can't imagine, but leave a lot of the detailed work to the reader, but your little dots and lines gives us enough to work on to make a brilliant picture in our minds. The fact that you mentioned Leaky Tom making a threat assessment of a potential customer, and the new stains on the floor told volumes in very few words. I wish i could write like that.
Thanks for a great time so far.
Vanir
Author's response
Wow.. Thanks. I'm not sure what to say! I always look back at what I've written and want to "add a little more." I'm not one for large paragraphs and being really descriptive. Sometimes it's needed, but most of the time, our imagination fills in the holes and draws a much more vibrant picture than I could ever describe without boring you all to death.
Again, thank you!