Review for Cracked nails & Red lollipops [Ryan/Brendon]

Cracked nails & Red lollipops [Ryan/Brendon]

(#) heartcandii_x 2008-03-28

Yes! They finally kissed! Pwahaha.

Hm. Despite his oh-so-innocent timing of when to enter his own room, I still love Spencer nonetheless. But then again, who doesn't? He's my puppy. At least, that's what I tell everyone. Spencer looks like an adorable puppy to me. But, I have a bad habit of going off into a ramble.

This chapter was even better, I really couldn't find a single mistake, except for the fact that this was... shorter than the last chapter. But, I won't pry, and you don't have to supply me with an excuse, because I don't know if you just didn't have enough motivation to write more, or if something might be going on in your life, but I am exceedingly grateful that you have supplied all of us with a wonderful chapter.

Hm, beta ignoring you, eh? I could totally beta for you! I will show you a cruelty deeper than the ocean!! XD I would become your slave, like I have to this story. I promise a life of servitude devoted to you!! XD
[Haha, I just finished re-reading some of /Eclipse/. But, please excuse me. I'm in a pleasant (if you catch my drift) mood.]

I wait diligently for your next update.

xoxo, orie

Author's response

Lol, yes yes! It took a while for them eh? But..but that's what makes the smut better when it comes right? Anticipation? Lol

Bahaha, yess, Spencer does kind of remind me of a puppy! Maybe like the one in lady and the tramp? haha :D But Brendon reminds me of Bambi! Big eyes and all...

Was this chapter shorter? Whoops! I'll make the next one longer for sure~!

My slave, eh? Kinky. Lol ;], that'd be awesome if you'd beta for me,I might just take you up on your offer!

I'm working on chapter five, it'll be done...probably by Sunday morning. :]

Kendra