Bloody hell! You freaked me out when I saw that you updated. XD 'Cause, I was just checking the PATD section 'cause I was watching depressing pregnancy stories, and when I first saw it, I was like, "Nah, that's just probably from the other chapter." And then when I checked the number of chapters, I freaked. XD But, in a good way, y'know, it's not like you did... I'm going to shut up.
Another splendid chapter. I rather enjoyed this one and greatly appreciated it, so I don't understand why you think it was crappy, because I (and I'm sure all of your other readers) think quite the opposite. This one was even better, regarding how many mistakes you made, which, don't fret, I couldn't find any. Whatever, it was sexy and convenient, and that's all that matters. XD I also loved the cute scenes as well.
He does have those Bambi eyes. I completely adore them. And the way you portrayed Spencer, with his mother hen quirk, was very humourous and realistic. I could totally see him acting that like. You make me love him even more. XD
I didn't think you'd take my beta offer seriously. XD But, I'm all about kinky, so I'm here when you want to take up said proposition. >;]
Dammit, I ramble. But, thank you for the surprising, lovely update. I am full of gratitude. And, don't worry about us readers, we'll manage to survive, so take your time with the next update whenever you're not preoccupied. Trust me, you'll only manage to spout greatness. I could take a knife and dissect you if I was the least bit of a surgeon, and you would be filled with (of course, your neccessary organs) prodigious prestiges of grandeur. As disguisting as that analogy is.
xoxo, orie
Author's response
Haha, well I hope I didn't cause any heart attacks with my double update~!
Thanks! But honestly I just thought that this chapter was one of my weaker ones, because it was more dialogue than thought. But I'm not sure, would people prefer more of that?
Don't worry about rambling ;], I love long comments, they fuel me to write the next chapter faster~!
Thanks for reading and your wonderful reviews! You have no idea how much I appreciate them.