Hmm, this is looking really interesting, and I'll be curious to see where you go with this. As it seems like there's no love for either Hermione or Ron in this story, as well as Albus, I'll be curious to see whether more of the secondary characters might be able to have a larger role, and if this will go on into the upcoming school year.
Author's response
I think I replied already to a later review of yours but I'll answer the quasi-questions you have here. (I'm just that nice). No there is no love for any of those three but there is not huge amounts of bashing either, and yes plenty of the secondary characters will have far larger roles later in the story. Thanks for the review :)