I took my time and read this (both parts) twice, once yesterday and then again today.
I love Dolly! I love the way she looks after Casey, and the way she tested Pete. How could you not love a woman like that? Well, as long as you’re on her good side. ;)
You can really see how much Pete and Casey love each other. So sweet and romantic.
Now I’m off to reread the last chapter and tell you what I think.
Author's response
^^ I'm glad the relationship between those two showed like I wanted it to. I was a little worried it wouldn't show properly at times, but I'm glad it did ^^.
And yes, I do love Dolly too. She was an awesome co-worker of mine, when we worked together. She always looked out for me as if I was fam so that's where I got my inspiration for her.
btw, I'm working on something and I need you to contact me through hotmail ^^