Really impressive story. Enough sex to keep anyone interested, and a good "theme" that doesn't detract one bit from the erotic side of it. In fact, I find myself reading the story as much for the non-erotic themes as the erotic ones. Very few authors that write this kind of work can put the two together without one distracting from the other. I look forward to seeing what you do as we go on.
Author's response
Thanks. The balancing isn't easy, but i believe i've got it down.:)
Vanir