(#) Jimm 2008-04-05
Oh, you evil person! Good chapter, but nasty cliffhanger.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Author's response
But isn't that the point of a cliffhanger, to be nasty? I mean how would it be to end a chapter with, "Oh dear," Harry said to himself, "I think I have a hangnail"?
Doesn't do much for me.
BJH